Short and ugly, but I made the deadline... barely. I REALLY want to make this character work, but I keep getting busy and forgetting about him. I'm hoping now that everything is slowing down a bit I can get a good start on him.
Feedback still welcomed on this even though it was super short.
Post by Nathan Turner on Mar 10, 2019 15:00:05 GMT -5
As I've said, I would definitely be giving feedback! (Though, as I'm still one of the newest around here, I'm not sure if my feedback is entirely going to line up with what the judges think! LOL.)
Let me preface this by saying that I'm probably a tad biased when it comes to your RPs, because I really love your character. I've always been fascinated with evil clown/trickster style gimmicks. I've tried before to pull them off and have never been quite able to figure it out, so I tip my hat to anyone who tries (and succeeds!) to write that style of character.
Let me get into the meat of the feedback. I don't want to be someone that throws someone under the bus for length of RP. I've always been a subscriber that quantity is greater than quality, but it's important to note that, in a place like this, where the talent level is sky-high pretty much across the board, maxing out that word limit is going to be something that each of us strive for every week. On top of that, I would say trying to max out those extra bonuses like submitting a segment (which I absolutely forgot to do last week) and getting those RPs in quickly.
Overall, I really enjoy your character and I really enjoy reading your work (as I've expressed to you in DMs). I think it's really just about pulling out those incremental advantages here because the talent pool is so gigantic.
BrotherLavender: Gunnar, I sent you my segment.
Mar 6, 2019 20:08:05 GMT -5
Gunnar Graves: I got it man thank you!
Mar 6, 2019 22:40:54 GMT -5
Gunnar Graves: Was waiting for some final touches on the show last night, but unfortunately still waiting. I’ll have the show and new card up tonight regardless. Sorry for the delay boys and girls
Mar 9, 2019 14:32:28 GMT -5