Post by Wayne Richards on Feb 27, 2017 9:50:01 GMT -5
Another masterpiece imo. You're really developing Emery in Union Battleground, and I don't know if it was intentional or not, but was there some symbolism in regards to the town in the hills and valley with the trench war title match? If not, you should take credit for it lol
Also, is it a faux pas for me to comment on these feedback threads? I don't know all the efed etiquette
Another masterpiece imo. You're really developing Emery in Union Battleground, and I don't know if it was intentional or not, but was there some symbolism in regards to the town in the hills and valley with the trench war title match? If not, you should take credit for it lol
Also, is it a faux pas for me to comment on these feedback threads? I don't know all the efed etiquette
Thanks! Also, yes! I wanted her to kind of be peaking over at something that she'd have adversity towards. Like she was in a trench, about to go over, but doing something mundane there instead. My stuff has a lot of foreshadowing and symbolism, which I can't wait for you guys to see more of as I go along!
Also no, feedback away. I do it all the time in XWA!
