Since all the cool kids are doing it, I thought I would join in. This is the first time I have been in a fed with a word limit under 3k words so anything you have to say would be bagus.
Post by Wayne Richards on Jan 19, 2017 20:55:57 GMT -5
I don't know how I missed this post, but anyway...
I liked that you spoke about the tribute show, as I brought some of the talent that's in here together. I liked that you mentioned how we have quite a few "part time" people and that they have the chance to win the belt and showcase it l, AND defend it on their home turf.
The only thing I could really nitpick was the opening dialogue with you and Ojeda. At first reading, it was a little confusing deciphering who was saying what. I'd suggest either breaking it up by color coding, writing it as a script, or writing it as a narrative, but that's just minor details.
It was a good piece and I look forward to seeing more from ya.
