Vs Nathan Turner

As I've said, I would definitely be giving feedback! (Though, as I'm still one of the newest around here, I'm not sure if my feedback is entirely going to line up with what the judges think! LOL.)

Let me preface this by saying that I'm probably a tad biased when it comes to your RPs, because I really love your character. I've always been fascinated with evil clown/trickster style gimmicks. I've tried before to pull them off and have never been quite able to figure it out, so I tip my hat to anyone who tries (and succeeds!) to write that style of character.

Let me get into the meat of the feedback. I don't want to be someone that throws someone under the bus for length of RP. I've always been a subscriber that quantity is greater than quality, but it's important to note that, in a place like this, where the talent level is sky-high pretty much across the board, maxing out that word limit is going to be something that each of us strive for every week. On top of that, I would say trying to max out those extra bonuses like submitting a segment (which I absolutely forgot to do last week) and getting those RPs in quickly.

Overall, I really enjoy your character and I really enjoy reading your work (as I've expressed to you in DMs). I think it's really just about pulling out those incremental advantages here because the talent pool is so gigantic.